Thursday, September 22, 2011

Unir


This boy used to work at a construction site somewhere in Solan, a beautiful town in Himachal Pradesh, India. Around 12 yrs old, overly fair with little pock marks on his cheeks and small eyes. He had a spark. I don’t know where he must be at the moment but he had something in him which struck me the first time I saw him.

I met him on the toy train, which I boarded at Kalka Junction. The wide gauge railway line did not ply across places beyond Kalka, thus the toy train. Personally I hated it. The scenic beauty, the snow capped mountains, the 103 tunnels on the way were all fine, but it was hell of a ride for me. The train went uphill and thus it went in circles. One could easily shake hands with the people in the first compartment of the train leaning out from the last. I had a massive weakness with anything which revolved in circles, may it be a toy train, a giant wheel or the thought of the earth spinning constantly.

The boy was sitting at the door of the moving train with some kind of a musical instrument in his hands. I went towards him and sat beside him. It was around 7:30 in the morning, and it was nippy. He was wearing a bandana which was more to protect himself from the cold. A headgear one could easily find people sporting in that part of the world. He was in a shirt which went almost till his knees and a cotton pant. It was a white shirt but it was visibly dirty. I got the impression that he was a local himachali lad.

“I am waiting for the tunnel” said the boy.
“Which tunnel?” I asked.
“The one coming up, it’s the longest one in the whole route till Shimla.” He said.
The Barog tunnel. I had heard about it, and even I used to wait for that particular tunnel as a kid. I remembered.  Little more than 1 km long and most probably the longest train tunnel in the world.
“Oh really! How far is it?” I asked nevertheless.
“It should be just around the corner.” The boy responded. I could see the excitement in his little eyes.

The train entered the tunnel and the brouhaha began, it was exiting indeed. The boy played his musical instrument, which I figured by now, was a Harmonica. He was superb at it, as the music echoed in the dark. It was a never ending tunnel which lasted around 3-4 minutes, keeping in mind the slowness of the toy train.

“Where are you going?” I asked
“Solan”
“Where in Solan?”
“Kasauli”
“Oh! I am going there too” I said.

I stayed in New Delhi, and I was going there to meet my school friends Tejesh and Honey. It was long since I caught up with my two best buddies from school. We had planned to visit Kullu, Manali, Rohtang, Dharamsala, Dalhousie and Shimla.

“Who are you with?” I asked.
“Look at the mountains. So beautiful na saab” he said with a dreamy look on his face.
“Are you travelling alone?” I asked again, befuddled.
“Yes”
“Where are your parents?”
“They are dead” He said, and played his Harmonica with the same dreamy look on his face.

I tried to sympathize with him, the one thing I am very bad at, but soon realized that he didn’t need it. We chatted about the place we were going to. He gave me insights about how to reach my destination and how to bargain with the coolies at the station. He also offered me to get a good bargain with the taxi walla, he was worried that they might fool me thinking of me as a tourist. We got down at a station and packed puri bhajji for ourselves. He wanted some jalebis with milk, so I bought him that too. He got friendly with me over a short span of time and I wasn’t complaining. I found his company interesting and fun. He was quiet a brainy chap with knowledge about what’s happening around the country. I got to know that he left school due to poor finances after his parents died. His uncle made him work at a construction site, a building which was coming up for residential purpose in Kasauli. He used to work as a laborer and live there amongst the ruins alone for the past three years.

“What is your name?” I realized that I had not asked his name yet.
“Unir..saab
He unceasingly addressed me as ‘saab’ even after I repeatedly warned him not to. It was more of a habit than respect I thought.

He was carrying a notebook with him which was full with sketches. That too good ones. He did not draw faces, but he sketched everything else, the scenery, the mountains, the terrace farming, an under construction building, a school, a music class with students learning to play some instruments. It almost revealed his life. He was sketching his life and he didn’t even know. I felt sorry for unir. He was a talented child within realm of possibilities, but he was stuck with the cruel reality of life. I felt for the plight of many children in similar hapless situations across the country. All I could do that time was to wish him well in his future life. I hoped he somehow made his own way and did well for himself in life, given the potential he had.

The train stopped at the Solan station, we both got down. Tejesh had called me up to apologize for not making up to the station. He was stuck with some important work, he reasoned and guided me on how to reach his place. I did not mind.

Since me and Unir had to reach Kasauli, we shared the cab. He was a also chivalrous kid and offered to pay for the cab. Which, of course I denied, although he tried vigorously. I had thought of giving him some money before we parted, but this episode made me sure that he won’t accept it ever. So I dropped the idea. He dropped down at the KC square, and said he would walk down from there.

“Ok saab, thank you. Come to my building where I work someday.” He said.
I smiled and patted his head, and we bid adieu.

I met Tejesh and Honey. They had taken a week off from their respective offices. We visited our school and caught up with other friends who were still around. Things had changed. The same school friends who taught each other swear words were being formal now. The same school friends, who introduced me to midnight hot on fashion TV, were talking about politics and the current fuck up the country is going through. Marriage was the hot topic instead of hot girls. These were the same guys who fought for the other girl in school.

We went for the vacation as planned. The trip was wonderful. We went for paragliding, skiing, trekking etc.  Boozing with old friends with the bonfire was fun. All this while somewhere I thought about Unir. I made a decision to visit him once when I get back to Solan. On the last day of my trip, I reached that building near KC square, asked a few men working there about Unir. No one gave me a proper idea where he was. Dejected, I started to walk back to Tejesh’s place and eventually to the station.

Saab!!” I heard a voice from somewhere.
I looked around and found Unir, sitting with his Harmonica outside the verandah where music was being taught.
“Hi Unir, How r u? I have been looking for you.”
“I did not expect you come saab!”
“I am sure you didn’t” I said with a smile.

I told him about my jaunt with friends. We chatted around for sometime. He seemed happy. It showed how lonely he must have been feeling for the last three years. No one to talk to, no one to share with, no one to play with. I said that I had only a few hours as I had to catch the train back to Delhi at 5 PM. As soon as he got to know this, he held my hand and took me to a nearby restaurant.

"What do you do in Delhi saab?" he asked on the way.
“I am a writer” I said.
“Will you write about me?” he asked curiously.
“Sure” I said and smiled.

“Now, I’ll treat you” he said suddenly with a sparkle in his eyes.
“But Unir..” I tried to speak.
He cut me in between, “I got my salary today! I have money saab
I was amazed by the innocence of the boy. “So, what will you treat me with Unir?”
“Two glasses of milk with jalebi please”

he ordered..


6 comments:

  1. beautiful! :)
    you should really write more preeteesh! infact, i had no idea how good u were! its almost like visualising the whole story in front of ur eyes! :)

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  2. realy nice story dudee carry on

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  3. Hey.. Really liked the story! Is there any truth to this?

    Keep writing!!

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  4. thanks krithika! 50 % truth 50% fiction. unir existed. story is inspired by him. i don't know where he is now. milk n jalebi..all real :)

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